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But I Have Some Ideas That Ya Might Wanna Fix.
1. NEVER, EVER, EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER use the lasso tool for sprites. NEVER. You Should Just Trace The Bitmap then eliminate the background, then put a square around the sprites you want. In my mind, lassos suck. :P
2. You might want to put some more thought into fight scenes. Those were WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY to short.
3. Animate The Background. Ever Watched Skittles And Bitz? Well, they get critizied for not animatin the background.
4. If your gonna resize sprites, resize em in a square, not a triangle. Yoshi was my main subject in this statement.
5. A Lot of the music was WAYYYY Too annoying.
Other then those, great movie. :P

March 17, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks. But like i've said to other people, I was only 11 when i made it, and i had been doing flash for about 5 months, but anyway good advice.

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Score: 3

"Umm"

submission: Kirby Kombat

date: December 22, 2006

A Little better sprite work, and more ideas, and your up on the top. =D

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Score: 6

"Little Tip, Though it was a great 1st movie."

submission: Mario's Final Fight?

date: December 21, 2006

I saw near the end the lava was a bit off. Not Too big, but might be a problem if you want to be a great spriter later. Great movie. 6/10, 4/5. :D

Author's Response:

Thanks for honesty, I tried to fix the lava, but sometimes flash really screws up with sprites... Just yesterday everything was red and I had to re rip them.

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Score: 5

"Liked It!"

submission: The Wiik is Ours

date: December 20, 2006

Cool! Keep It Up! :D

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Score: 2

"Not Worth a Zero"

submission: mr sandmaaaaaaannn....

date: December 19, 2006

But not worth a 10 either. And dont say i havent done any flash, I've made 3 and sent them all, but they all got blammed so i know. :)
Room for improvement, but with a little more artistic idea, you got yallself made! :D